Thursday, August 5, 2010

Frozen Tears


Forgive me for bad Hindi Grammar (Vyakaran) & spelling

7 comments:

BK Chowla, said...

It is too heavy for me, sorry.

Himanshu said...

well the tears are frozen thats why you are feeling it heavy. I think i should let them flow

adreamygal said...

Himanshu , This is toooo good , well one of the best , short yet so profound poem I have read so far .. Dont have answers for that question ,but yes so thought provoking ! Dont have words to say ..its just Awesome !! :)

Delhi Goon said...

Hey, nice poem. I like short poems, and this one has depth. I also like the fact its straight off your copy... seems different.

Himanshu said...

Dreamygal thk for comment sorry i m bit late as sytem not working

Delhi Goon thks alot for comments

Vij@ソ said...

himanshu it's really gud yaar and your hindi is not bad...

Himanshu said...

@Vijay thks alot man